There is a family of three a mom, a dad and there little girl named Alisha who is 6. They have to fly to New York city to have a banquet dinner for the dads work. This family is from a small town called peferlaw which is north of the city way up north. They are farmers so they only own farmers clothes so they dont have any fancy clothes. The banquet they are going to is very dressy and they are embaressed if they dont go or go with there farmer clothes. Their plane to New York city leaves at 5pm and they need to go and get new and facy clothes.
After a few hours of shopping they finally got clothes and they went home to put them on and see how it looks, they were super excited now and off the went in the taxi to the airport in Toronto. It took two hours and they finally arrived in New York city when they got to the banquet they still had the wrong clothes but stayed the night and enjoyed it.
When they got home Alisha said we should do it again
you should complete the story and it will be better, but good start and trying puttin in more details
ReplyDeleteI agree with everything Zeba said!
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