Girls Story

"The cold was so intense that the ground beneath her feet every step she took her feet were colder then ever before. She came from California and she lived there all of her life untill a month ago so she wasn’t used to this bone chilling cold. She didn’t like this freezing cold and wanted to go back to where she’s from but they had to move to Toronto because her dad found a job in Toronto. The ground was so cold that you couldn’t stand there for very long, even if you had shoes on because your shoes would be frozen and you wouldn’t walk, because you would be able to feel your feet. She didn’t care because she knew she wouldn’t get sick and everyone just looked at her like she has three heads. The ground was so cold that it was frozen it wasn’t so much that it was little frozen and you could take it, this was all white not from snow it was just so cold that the ground totally froze so i t was like ice for as long as you can see. She was alone on he the streets lost, freezing cold and starving to death and she couldn’t see anyone. She sat there and waited for someone to come to pick her up but she knew that anyone wasn’t going to pick her up because no one knew that she left. "Hello" mom"? "Dad"? Im starting to open my eyes ad i see my parents "what happened"? you went into a coma. "But what just happened wasnt real?" Not it wasnt. then I woke up from my coma.