Friday, 27 April 2012

Someone i love

I love when im next to you
Your smile brightness up my day,
You give me butterflies when you say i love you
I promise ill never leave you,
Being in your arms is amazing
I never felt this way about someone like i do like you
I love the 3 hour long phone conversations we have
Your the biggest sweetheart
I never want to loose you,
Your my sunshine
and my everything
I love you

2 comments:

  1. cute poem, love is everything

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  2. Olivia,

    This is a very sweet poem. I think you can help draw your reader into the poem by using more metaphor and simile to describe what you are commenting on (his smile, etc.)

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